What a fun page! Such a great Mother/Daughter night out... maybe not for you... but great memories for her!
On the first page there's just a couple things. You wrote in both present and past tense and so assuming you want past tense, you would have to change "have wanted" and "has failed" both to "had".
What a fun page! Such a great Mother/Daughter night out... maybe not for you... but great memories for her!
ReplyDeleteOn the first page there's just a couple things. You wrote in both present and past tense and so assuming you want past tense, you would have to change "have wanted" and "has failed" both to "had".