Wednesday, April 7, 2010

Story Book Page 86 and 87


  1. second paragraph, second sentence, needs a "t" added to "though".

    I love the colors and photos! Everything fits so well together. Just the words seem a little light and are hard to read at times... would it work to make them black... or would that ruin the effect?

    Seeing those pictures on the second page, though, have given me butterflies in my stomach... I'm so not looking forward to playing in Helen's next recital!

    Oh, and about the accordion, what a great instrument, eh? Brings back wonderful childhood memories of when we had one in the house for a while. Was it Pake's? ... I don't remember.

  2. I don't know...(the accordian)...

    I want to come to the recital. Be sure to let me know when it is!

    I could not make the font larger(which would have made it easier to read)because it wouldn't fit. I may try to change the color to black though. That might do it.