Monday, January 25, 2010

StoryBook Page 10 and 11


  1. "when we because teenagers" should say "when we became teenagers" and in the title you write "kids' teeth" but in the 'story' you forgot the apostrophe when you wrote "kids teeth" again.

    Cute page... i'm not there yet with the hygienist... i still smile and nod!

  2. what cute clothes! I'm surprised they weren't upset with you. You definitely have a way about befriending people... it's truly a wonderful gift.

    (The page looks perfect, BTW.)

  3. on second thought, it seems that there should be a comma after "seemed afraid to let me"